Main Round 1 Submission: Team Come @ Me Bro

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TEAM: Come @ Me Bro
MEMBERS: marks (fic), beltenebra (fic), murphym (fic), ryekamasaki (fic), mousapelli (fic), sisaturday (art), prillalar (coding)
TITLE: Take This (It’s Dangerous to Bro Alone)
SERIES: Haikyuu!!
MAIN SHIP: Bokuto Koutarou/Kuroo Tetsurou
RATING: G
CHARACTERS: Bokuto, Kuroo, Kenma, Akaashi
SIDE PAIRINGS: None.
MAJOR TAGS: None.
ADDITIONAL TAGS: Soulmate marks, friends to lovers, canon to post-canon
SUMMARY: Kuroo and Bokuto don't know who the lines on their soul tattoos are growing out to reach, but they're definitely going to find out together.
WORK LENGTH: 7430 words, 6 images
SCRIPT: You can make our entry display all the text and images at once by clicking the “Flat View” button in the top right corner.
NOTES: We hope that you enjoy our MR!

Comments

COMMENT: Team KinKage

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This was such a lovely and sweet entry!! I loved seeing the tattos progressing as I was advancing in the fic, it was a nice touch to the story and we could see how beautiful they were. I've never read a soulmate AU with tattos spreading that far, so I was pleasantly surprised! Each little line is proof of their love and the time they spent together, aaa. It was also very nice to start from the day they met, since we didn't get that in canon.

You guys gave us their story and how they fell in love with each other, going from simple acquaintances to best bros to best friends before becoming partners, and that was delivered with beautiful words! The slight pining added to the anticipation and we could only feel happy for them when they realized they were soulmates from the start.

Some lines that really made me laugh!

["Kuroo Tetsurou, ace killer"] such epic fndjs

["visually interesting"] that's a succinct way to describe Bokuto Koutarou

["Do you get taller every time I see you?"] no, that's just his bedhair getting messier and messier lmao

Good job, thank you for sharing!! :D

Re: COMMENT: Team KinKage

[mousapelli]

Thank you so much! We worked really hard to bring it together and it's great to hear the pacing worked for you.