Main Round 1 Submission: Team Come @ Me Bro

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TEAM: Come @ Me Bro
MEMBERS: marks (fic), beltenebra (fic), murphym (fic), ryekamasaki (fic), mousapelli (fic), sisaturday (art), prillalar (coding)
TITLE: Take This (It’s Dangerous to Bro Alone)
SERIES: Haikyuu!!
MAIN SHIP: Bokuto Koutarou/Kuroo Tetsurou
RATING: G
CHARACTERS: Bokuto, Kuroo, Kenma, Akaashi
SIDE PAIRINGS: None.
MAJOR TAGS: None.
ADDITIONAL TAGS: Soulmate marks, friends to lovers, canon to post-canon
SUMMARY: Kuroo and Bokuto don't know who the lines on their soul tattoos are growing out to reach, but they're definitely going to find out together.
WORK LENGTH: 7430 words, 6 images
SCRIPT: You can make our entry display all the text and images at once by clicking the “Flat View” button in the top right corner.
NOTES: We hope that you enjoy our MR!

Comments

COMMENT: Team Victuuri

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okay so the title!! I love it!

I think one of the things that stood out most and centered me in the story was the use of detail! In the art, there's the gradual growth of the marks and the pinkies touching. In the prose, there's the specific, named real-world objects (the faded t-shirt, the video games) that just make the characters so accessible. This has been mentioned before, but it's really incredible that your team was able to stay so stylistically consistent chapter-to-chapter with so many authors – really great job creating a cohesive, easy to navigate piece that combined multiple media types smoothly.

Re: COMMENT: Team Victuuri

[mousapelli]

Thank you! We're happy you enjoyed it and thought it all fit together well!