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Charlie ([personal profile] deducingontheroof) wrote in [community profile] sportsfest18_mr1 2018-07-17 07:43 am (UTC)

COMMENT: Team 29 Balls (and a Bucket) to the Face

first off, i'm screaming??? i love bokuro so so much and they were characterized so perfectly in this, from the competition in their handshake at their first meeting to bokuto just throwing shit into boxes and both of them neglecting unpacking fully, and i love it so much!! you guys nailed their characters!!

the coding was so so cool!! i loved being able to click through it like that! as much as i usually like just scrolling and seeing everything in line, i liked this just as much, if not more! it was put together so well, and it was super cohesive!!

the art was just super gorgeous. i loved how the colours started out faded, and grew in intensity as the tattoos also grew. the colours themselves were gorgeous and chosen so well, and i adore your style!!

i'm trying to think of something else specific about the fic, but its so hard because i just loved the entire thing!! the plot, the dialogue, the characterization, the styles, it was all just so perfect for me!! i am absolutely in love with how their relationship developed, from friendly rivals to best bros to best friends and eventually to romantic partners. it was so natural, and it was so them

thank you so much for bringing this into the world!! im screeching at how absolutely stunning it was!!!!!

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