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rozalia ([personal profile] presivion) wrote in [community profile] sportsfest18_mr1 2018-07-16 11:04 am (UTC)

COMMENT: team reelfriendship

i loooove it so much, guys!! i really love the format, the fact that it was split into parts divided by the artwork of developing tattoos made it really easy and pleasant to read. i hardly noticed the length and the passage of time so when i got to the final page i was like "oh... really?".

i admit i don't usually enjoy soulmate aus, but i really liked how you showed their developing bokukuro's relationship step by step and made their soulmate bond just a confirmation that they're perfect for each other and not a cause.

great job!!!!

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