artenon: graphic of a volleyball in the bi pride flag colors (volleybi)
qork ([personal profile] artenon) wrote in [community profile] sportsfest18_mr1 2018-07-15 06:35 pm (UTC)

Comment: Team Grandstand

I really love this! From concept to execution it's just so perfect? I love how it started with blue and yellow and gradually transitioned to the same green. I love the story told in so few words. I love Kinjou's schedule and the way it changes to accommodate Arakita's presence in his life. That second one is SO CUTE, all the crossed-out stuff and what they've been replaced with and the pushing back his bedtime. Kinjou is suffering but it's really funny and cute, so. Sorry Kinjou. I love the artwork at the end, all smiles and wrapped up in each other. I only regret that I have never seen or watched Yowapeda so I can't appreciate this even MORE. But even though I don't know anything about the characters at all, I feel like I've learned about Kinjou and Arakita through this entry. What a lovingly-crafted glimpse into their university life!! Good job to your entire team!!

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