ahsdfkgjsh i will do my best to organise my thoughts about this cohensively—

i absolutely love the portrayal of this?? like the way your team chose to format this is lovely— it's easy on the eyes and highly visual, which played towards your team's strength! the lineart itself was soooo good, and the idea is very well thought-out; the effort you've put into this entry really shines through!!!

it was really cute how panel by panel, the colours started to change and move towards the colour green, and it further strengthened the development you could see in their relationship and symbolised the passing of time really well!!!

i have no clue about the characters (though they seem to be cute af??? i'm really curious about them now!!), but i loved the use of the schedule (cute character quirk!!) that went from organised and timely to being more messy (changes in plans + more time w arakita how lovely and cute!!!)

thank you for sharing these adorable boys with everyone; i'm so happy to have had a chance to view & appreciate this!!! ♡