oh my goodness i'm just a big pile of soft emotions right now, this was so incredibly sweet and heartwarming and loving and tender i don't even know how to begin ;__;
i absolutely love the art, what a bright and lovely way to start their story. the art style is so cute and expressive, and i couldn't stop laughing at kindaichi giving kageyama the milk and kageyama saying, "you're just giving me this?!" WHAT A SWEET SILLY BOY.
and then after that is so much pain, augh, so well written. every part of this was so beautifully written. i know the pain gives way to healing and acceptance later but in the meantime seeing kageyama bear it alone was so heartwrenching ;-; but then kindaichi worrying about him and pleading for him to eat just dhvbdhfg i can't, every part of it broke my heart.
AND THEN GOING RIGHT INTO CHASING PAVEMENTS OUCH!!! but really, i thought it was really nice to include a playlist in your MR entry, music is such a powerful way to evoke emotion and you did so really well here!!
the rest of their story also plays out so beautifully, i'm so soft ;;;___;;; when kindaichi hit kageyama's toss i was yelling into my fist. WHEN THEY ADMIT OUT LOUD THAT THEY'RE LIFE PARTNERS. and then they live together oh my god???? THE DISASTER BAKING. AND OF COURSE, THEIR HANA-CHAN. I'M CRYING. domestic kinkages were a thing i didn't realize i needed but it's here and i love it so much!!
thank you so much for this, what a beautiful project of art, music, and writing, it all comes together in such wonderful harmony and i thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish :')
COMMENT: Team Grandstand
i absolutely love the art, what a bright and lovely way to start their story. the art style is so cute and expressive, and i couldn't stop laughing at kindaichi giving kageyama the milk and kageyama saying, "you're just giving me this?!" WHAT A SWEET SILLY BOY.
and then after that is so much pain, augh, so well written. every part of this was so beautifully written. i know the pain gives way to healing and acceptance later but in the meantime seeing kageyama bear it alone was so heartwrenching ;-; but then kindaichi worrying about him and pleading for him to eat just dhvbdhfg i can't, every part of it broke my heart.
AND THEN GOING RIGHT INTO CHASING PAVEMENTS OUCH!!! but really, i thought it was really nice to include a playlist in your MR entry, music is such a powerful way to evoke emotion and you did so really well here!!
the rest of their story also plays out so beautifully, i'm so soft ;;;___;;; when kindaichi hit kageyama's toss i was yelling into my fist. WHEN THEY ADMIT OUT LOUD THAT THEY'RE LIFE PARTNERS. and then they live together oh my god???? THE DISASTER BAKING. AND OF COURSE, THEIR HANA-CHAN. I'M CRYING. domestic kinkages were a thing i didn't realize i needed but it's here and i love it so much!!
thank you so much for this, what a beautiful project of art, music, and writing, it all comes together in such wonderful harmony and i thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish :')